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Wednesday, 4 March 2015



Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.

WALT: Entertain (character description)


Think of a character you could write about.

Draw them.  

Introduce your character in an entertaining way.

Describe their looks.  

Describe their personality.  

I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)

Criteria: I can

Self Assessment

Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)

  • use a range of verbs

Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)

  • select one or two similes

  • use onomatopoeia to show sounds

  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)

My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)

Learning Partner Comment

Feedback: I love the way you did all the things corectly

Feedforward: Next time make sure you do the spaces a littel bit bigger 


Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done?

Transformaman can transform into anything. His superpower is sharp spikes he can grow then he shoots them. He is a cyborg half human half robot. He has a permanent snarl and a angry expression! He wears a yellow and red suit. His favourite thing to do on break is transform into a rocket and blast across space in seconds. His favourite song is rumor has it. Being grumpy is his personality look out. 

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