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Wednesday, 4 March 2015

Writing

“Characters”

Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.

WALT: Entertain (character description)

Task:

Think of a character you could write about.

Draw them.  

Introduce your character in an entertaining way.

Describe their looks.  


Describe their personality.  

I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)


Criteria: I can

Self Assessment


Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)

  • use a range of verbs

Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)

  • select one or two similes

  • use onomatopoeia to show sounds

  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)

My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)


Learning Partner Comment

Feedback: I love the way you did all the things corectly


Feedforward: Next time make sure you do the spaces a littel bit bigger 


Name:

Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done?


Transformaman can transform into anything. His superpower is sharp spikes he can grow then he shoots them. He is a cyborg half human half robot. He has a permanent snarl and a angry expression! He wears a yellow and red suit. His favourite thing to do on break is transform into a rocket and blast across space in seconds. His favourite song is rumor has it. Being grumpy is his personality look out. 

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