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Sunday, 22 March 2015

Oral storytelling

I think I did a good job of the planning stage because it didn't take me long and it looked detailed. My plan made it really easy to tell the story. My favourite sound effect was ch, ch, ch, ch when I was a giant heat ray. 

I could have done better with the actions because it was hard to understand. My actions were not that clear and the audience did not take part. 



  1. Great! Please reflect on the success criteria (on page 4): what did you do well? Where could you improve?

  2. Wow Toby! You have so many creative ideas. Transformerman sounds like the man! Your reflection is excellent and I think you have identified exactly what you need to work on. Great job Toby!